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Inner Voice

Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. ROADS - MORNING


  4. PETER drives his red coupe.


  5. PETER (V.O.): I slept well last night. I'm feeling good.


  6. EXT. GOLDEN BEACH - LATER


  7. Peter swims from one side of the swimming area to the other.


  8. PETER (V.O.): I hold my breath to swim, but I can still hear myself talking in my head. Human's brain mechanism is amazing.


  9. Thinking.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): While most humans have internal dialogues or inner monologues, mine is like non-stop commentaries.


  11. Self-talking.


  12. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): But humankind only have individual consciousness but not collective consciousness. We need to communicate or we don't know what others are thinking about.


  13. Act 2


  14. EXT. RESTAURANT - NOON


  15. Finishing his noodles and ice coffee, Peter hesitates to leave.


  16. PETER (V.O.): Oh, it's raining hard. Let me entertain some answer requests in Quora.


  17. Peter reads Quora notifications in his mobile.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've become a key opinion leader. I've got endless answer requests all over the world.


  19. Reading.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Here's a fan's question: How much does our daily life affect our philosophy of life, and why?


  21. Self-talking.


  22. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Few understand what is philosophy and what's life. Anyhow, I know what he's getting at.


  23. Pausing.


  24. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Let me type on my mobile my inner voice's response to the answer request.


  25. Peter types: Events in daily life all trigger our cognitive behavioural responses including the running inner voices. The philosophy of life so-called may be affirmed or negatived, depending on how critical we are.


  26. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): If we had collective consciousness or shared inner voices, life might be a lot easier.


  27. Pausing.


  28. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Ah, that won't be practical as there're so many existing beings on Earth, it could be very confusing.


  29. Pausing.


  30. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): But it's logically possible that the cosmic design can make our brains as super-computers in processing all the information.


  31. Thinking.


  32. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): The DNAs and functions of our body parts in particular our brains as we know them are complicated and sophisticated.


  33. Raining less. Peter leaves.

  34. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - AFTERNOON


  35. Peter opens some of the windows from G/F to 2/F.


  36. PETER (V.O.): Despite the showers, there's still natural horizontal and vertical ventilation.


  37. Sitting in the penthouse studio, Peter checks answer requests from Quora again.


  38. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Some Quorans like to fantasize. Here's one: What would I do if I knew I could not fail?


  39. Pausing.


  40. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I can't fail, as I treat unsatisfactory results as my temporary setbacks. I'd try again.


  41. Peter types his short answer: Be more creative and innovative.


  42. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I really like to be innovative if I can.


  43. Appearing in the G/F sitting room, Peter looks at his late wife's photo placed in a shelf.


  44. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I fantasize that I could invent a super time-travel machine allowing tourists from the past to have a short stay in the present.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I want my late wife to witness what our son has become.

  47. Pausing.


  48. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Meanwhile, she might actually know, only that I consciously don't know how she knows.


  49. Act 3


  50. EXT. ROADS - EVENING


  51. Peter is driving his SMART car.


  52. PETER (V.O.): Perhaps, my late wife has also whispered in the silence, only that I wasn't listening well.


  53. Pausing.


  54. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Similar to my internal monologue, who can listen to my inner voice?


  55. Self-talking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): As I've already internalised my late wife in me, that she can listen to my inner voice might not be a fantasy.


  57. Self-talking.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I believe I feel it. I don't have to be critical.


  59. Pausing.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And my inner voice never lies.


  61. Peter looks content.


  62. FADE OUT.


  63. THE END


 
 
 

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