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The Shelf Life of Love

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jun 3
  • 3 min read

Updated: Jun 5

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. BEDROOM - 05:15


  5. Darkness, save for the weak glow of a digital alarm clock. PETER gently rises from bed.


  6. PETER (V.O.): Today is the final day to file my tax return.


  7. Sitting by the bedside, Peter boots up his laptop and shifts through a stack of receipts.


  8. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The sooner I complete it, the better. I've a professional engagement in the afternoon.


  9. Peter works with quiet concentration.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And I want to go swimming before that.


  11. Dawn light begins to seep through the curtains.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've reviewed the journal entries and completed the profit and loss account, as well as the balance sheet.


  13. Peter enters various figures in the tax return form.


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Done!


  15. Act 2


  16. INT. BEDROOM - 10:50


  17. Sitting by the bedside, Peter completes a Duolingo streak.


  18. PETER: It's time for my swim.


  19. Peter's WIFE opens a hanging shelf to check its contents. Not paying attention, Peter bumps into the corner of the shelf door.


  20. PETER: Oh!


  21. Peter groans and covers his forehead with his hands. In the next moment, both he and his wife notice blood in his hands.


  22. WIFE: OMG! You're bleeding heavily...Maid! Get me a towel! Quick!


  23. Peter's wife then applies pressure on Peter's wound.


  24. WIFE (Cont'd): Hold this. Press hard. Don't let go.


  25. Peter obeys weakly, his eyes wide with shock and pain.


  26. WIFE (Cont'd): I need to call an ambulance.


  27. Peter's wife dials 999.


  28. WIFE (to phone): Ambulance, yes, my husband, he hits his head on a shelf. Forehead wound, significant bleeding...Yes, conscious but dazed...


  29. Peter's wife hangs up, immediately grabbing another clean towel, replacing the saturated one,


  30. PETER: I've to attend a screening interview with my client at 2pm today. I need to inform the Secretariat of my emergency and cancel the engagement promptly.


  31. Grabbing his smartphone, Peter makes a few calls. Soon after, the PARAMEDICS arrive.


  32. MONTAGE


  33. A Hospital triage - 12:00. Bandaged, Peter receives his first dose of ADT for tetanus prevention.


  34. B. Hospital waiting area - 15:50. We hear Peter's name being announced over the public address system.


  35. C. Doctor's station - 15:55. As the DOCTOR removes Peter's bandage, blood streams down his eyes and cheeks.


  36. D. Nurse room - 16:05. A NURSE carefully stitiches Peter's forehead wound with four precise stitches.


  37. END MONTAGE


  38. INT. BEDROOM - 17:30


  39. Resting in a clean bed, Peter looks restless.


  40. PETER (V.O.): Because I didn't take care of myself, I've caused a lot of inconvenience for those relying on me. I need to inform them about my availability to reschedule the screening interview.


  41. Peter sits up and begins to type on his smartphone.


  42. INT. DINING ROOM - 21:00


  43. On phone screen, we can see Peter's elder son and daughter-in-law having FaceTime call with him and his wife.


  44. PETER (V.O): I can sense their deep concern.


  45. Chatting.


  46. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): My carelessness has caused pain and suffering to everyone who loves me.


  47. We hear: ...There'll be no swimming for a month after healing...


  48. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): But swimming has been a part of my daily routine!


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): A shelf corner, ignored for years, re-writes my day in a painful vivid way.


  51. Pausing.


  52. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): For the first time, I truly understand what it means to take care.


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM - 22:15

  55.  

  56. Peter adds an image of himself with bandages on his forehead, taken after his hospital discharge to a draft on his laptop.


  57. PETER (V.O): The shelf drew blood. My wife's hands drew love.


  58. Thinking.


  59. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): A corner cut me open, yet it also binds us together.


  60. Reflecting.


  61. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): The Shelf Life of Love? Infinite.


  62. FADE OUT


  63. END

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