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The Small Aircraft Boy

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Nov 2
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 09:30


  4. Sunlight filters through the curtains. casting soft patterns on the wall. Sitting up in bed, PETER scrolls through the Facebook feeds.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Today is the day my delivery arrives: the cheapest phone I've ever bought, priced at HK$649.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The 2025 phone's design and colour are visually appealing. Days ago, I causually asked my brothers' thoughts on its specifications and their surprise only fueled my impulse to buy.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Could something so inexpensive really meet my needs?


  10. Then, he gets a phone message.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No one answered the door? Already left the parcel with the caretaker at the lobby?


  12. Looking frustrated, Peter grabs the door key and leaves.


  13. Act 2


  14. INT. HALLWAY - LIFT - CONTINUOUS


  15. Peter steps out of his flat. He sees NEIGHBOUR#1 (60s) waiting for the lift.


  16. NEIGHBOUR#1: Going down?


  17. PETER: Yes, to get a parcel from the caretaker. Going to your moring tea?


  18. Neighbour#2 nods. The lift dings. The doors slide open. They step in. The doors close. The lift begins to descend.


  19. NEIGHBOUR#1: Yes...It's great that your son decided to pursue his career in Hong Kong rather than in Australia.


  20. Nodding, Peter looks a little puzzled.


  21. PETER (V.O.): Our new neighbour moved in while my son was doing his internship in Sydney. They must have introduced themselves while waiting for the lift.


  22. The lift dings.


  23. INT. LOBBY - CONTINUOUS


  24. Spacious. NEIGHBOUR#2 (70s) sits in the sofa area with a walking stick by his side. He greets Peter.


  25. PETER: Morning...


  26. Peter rushes to the desk of the CARETAKER, who is dealing with a small cardboard box.


  27. PETER: The curier has just informed me that he has delivered the parcel to you instead.


  28. CARETAKER: Yes, he has just left...For you.


  29. Aftert claiming the parcel, Peter is relieved and turns to Neighbour#2.


  30. PETER (V.O.): Our last conversation in the elevator was too brief for him to share more.


  31. Recalling.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He and his wife watched my children grow up.


  33. Recalling.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): His wife always called my younger son "the small aircraft boy."


  35. Recalling.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When he was four, five years old, he'd never walk. Always running through the lobby, arms stretched out like wings.


  37. Pausing.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He got his private pilot's licence before returning to Hong Kong.


  39. Placing his parcel on a coffee table, Peter sits across Neighour#2.


  40. PETER: You're a chief mechanic, weren't you? On the cargo ships.


  41. Neighbour#2's eyes light up.


  42. NEIGHBOUR#2: For decades. All over the world. The engine room was my kingdom.


  43. PETER: How did you maintain the ships remain seaworthy all the time?


  44. NEIGHBOUR#2: Some issues could be temporarily fixed through welding.

  45.  

  46. PETER: Tell me more.


  47. Peter listens, captivated.


  48. PETER (V.O.): My Dad was a newspaper photograher who later became an iron foundry welder.


  49. Recalling.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Unlike photography, my Dad never talked about welding much. Just that it was hot, dirty work.


  51. Pausing.


  52. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Understanding my parents' lives can be a lifelong process.


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM - 22:45


  55. Peter uploads an image of what "the small aircraft boy" has transformed onto a draft on his laptop.


  56. PETER (V.O.): The most accurate prophecies aren't found in crystal balls, but in the nicknames given by observant neighbours. "The small aircraft boy" wasn't a label; it's a diagnosis of destiny.


  57. Thinking.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Childhood isn't just a phase to outgrow; it's the foundation of life. The small aircarft boy didn't vanish, he just taxied to the runway.


  59. Reflecting.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Genius isn't always in the complex equation. Sometimes, it's in the simple, perfect accuracy of a name: the small aircraft boy.


  61. FADE OUT


  62. END

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