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The Weight of Things

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • May 4
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. STUDY/STUDIO- 10:30


  5. Cluttered in its final stages of being emptied.


  6. PETER (V.O.): We've just three days left to clear the space for renovations before my wife and I fly out for our trip in May.


  7. Pausing.


  8. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've relocated most of the light weight items I want to keep back to my home in NT.


  9. Peter gazes at the wardrobe.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I need to keep some of my suits at my urban home.


  11. While retrieving his suits, he discovers a car key nestled in a pocket.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Since April 1, I've been wonderting where I might have misplaced it. I checked the pockets before but didn't feel the weight of the car key.


  13. Peter takes a photo of the key and sends it to the family chat group with the message: Found it inside a pocket!


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It brightens my day.


  15. Act 2

  16.  

  17. EXT. ROADS TO AND FROM SILVERSTRAND - 14:OO


  18. Peter is driving a deep blue MB.


  19. PETER (V.O.): I bought it in 2002 to prove to my Dad that I had succeeded.


  20. Driving.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He sat in it only a few times. I rarely take it out.


  22. The dashboard mileage reads around 44,000 kms.


  23. Later, a wet-haired Peter is driving.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I prefer to drive my 2-door coupes over a heavy 4-door sedan.


  25. A car behind speeds past Peter's.


  26. INT. STUDY/STUDIO - 17:00


  27. Peter stares at stacks of books lining the walls.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): They aren't just papers or things, they hold knowledge and stories.


  29. Peter pulls out a worn copy of "An Inquiry into Meaning and Truth".


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I studied what is meant by empirical evidence for the truth of a proposition.


  31. Pausing.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I prefer articulate hesitation than inarticulate certainty.


  33. Pausing.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I find it very hard to let go, although I know the cost of holding on too long.


  35. Then, Peter finds some faded photos.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Funny how the lightest objects hold the weight of things I can't let go.


  37. EXT. ESTATE CAR PARK - 18:00


  38. Peter struggles with bags of stuff. After placing them inside his red coupe, he looks relievied.


  39. PETER (Cont'd): I spent my life collecting, the weight of things outlives my strength to carry them.


  40. Pausing.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'll fill most of its space before driving back to my home in NT.


  42. INT. STUDY/STUDIO - 19:00


  43. Peter stares at the Clarvinova.


  44. PETER (V.O.): When we bought it in 1987, it was an innovative product. Sharon would play the keyboard while I strummed the guitar and sang,

  45.  

  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's not the weight of things that break my back - it's the weight of what they mean.


  48. Peter gazes at the boxes and items scattered on the floor.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): They've our children's fingerprints.


  50. Pausing.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): An apartment is just walls. The weight of things inside? That's the life my family lived.


  52. Pausing.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I now travel light, and I know the weight of things I leave behind.


  54. Act 3

  55.  

  56. INT. STUDY/STUDIO - 22:15

  57.  

  58. Peter inserts an AI drawing titled: "The Weight of Things..." to a draft on his laptop.

  59.  

  60. PETER (V.O): I forget I even kept a thing...until it's in my hand again. Things are the markers of time, memory and identity.


  61. Thinking.


  62. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Since attachment complicates detachment, I won't easily discard anything or anyone.


  63. Reflecting.

  64.  

  65. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): On marriage, we measure the weight of things unsaid. We're what we keep or leave behind.


  66. FADE OUT


  67. END



 
 
 

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