Water in the Oil
- Peter K F Cheung SBS
- Sep 2
- 3 min read
FADE IN
Act 1
INT. BEDROOM - 22:15
Smartphone in hand, PETER researches on something.
PETER (V.O.): There is oil mixing with coolant in the reservoir or radiator of my 2000 Toyota Previa.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My car repairer suggested to replace the engine or to scrap the car. .
Researching.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Are there value-for-money alternatives?
Reading.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's said that repair just the head gasket provides the best value if the damage is limited.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Is a single drop of water in the oil a promise the engine can no longer keep?
Act 2
FLASHBACK
INT. TOYOTA SHOWROOM - DAY (2000)
Peter (46) and his pregnant WIFE are admiring the sleek lines of a Previa and the sporty design of a MR2.
WIFE: Look at the 8-seater Previa. Plenty of space for our children and the maids.
PETER: But check out the MR2, It's sporty and fun.
They get closer to the Previa, admiring its practicality.
WIFE: It's got room for strollers and car seats.
PETER: It feels safe. But I do miss that thrill...
They walk over to the MR2.
PETER (Cont'd): I'm captivated by its sleek design.
WIFE: A 2-seater? With another baby on the way?
PETER: We can buy both...
WIFE: No. You've a two-door Nissan, a two-door Eunos...
PETER: Yes, Previa is the better choice, we only like to go places with our children.
END FLASHBACK
PETER (V.O.): Since summer 2000, my family has embarked on countless journeys in it.
MONTAGE OF RECENT TRIPS
A. 27 Aug, 2025. Peter drives it to the Airport to pick up his elder DAUGHTER, who is returning home.
B. 28 Aug, 2025. Peter drives it to a car shop to have new two remote controls made.
C. 31 Aug. 2025, Peter's wife drives it to APM, but the engine stalls as she searches for a parking spot in the lot.
END MONTAGE
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): So, my wife arranged for the Previa to be towed to our repairer; and I learned about the issues with our Previa a few hours ago.
Researching.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The engine's purpose is to separate what powers from what cools. Mix them, and its purpose is lost.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Water in the oil is a silent revolution; it doesn't break the machine from the outside, but corrupts it from within.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The most sophisticated system can be undone by the simplest, most elemental intrusion.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The greatest threat to any pure thing is not its opposite, but its dilution.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Water and oil are both vital. It isn't their nature that is flawed, but their combination. Some things are meant to be separate.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Some mixtures aren't solutions. They're irreversible mistakes that change the nature of everything they touch.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A relationship can run for miles on good oil. But it only takes a cup of cold truth in the wrong place to seize it up forever.
Act 3
INT. BEDROOM - 23:30
Peter uploads an image of milky fluid in car engine parts to a draft on his laptop.
PETER (V.O.): The diagnosis is never "water and oil". It is always water in the oil. The intrusion is what defines the failure.
Thinking.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Nostalgia is the oil, preserving the past in a golden glow. Clarity is the water that mixes in, creating a cloudy, imperfect emulsion of truth.
Reflecting.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm a sum of my memories, an engine built from experience. A sudden regret can be water that contaminates the whole, making the past impossible to navigate.
FADE OUT
END
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