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Paradise Found

Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS

Updated: Aug 25, 2021

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. ROADS TO HKUST - MORNING


  4. Traffic jam. PETER waits restlessly behind the driving wheel. He sends an email.


  5. PETER (V.O.): The traffic reports have never covered this stretch of the road.


  6. Arriving at a car park, a waiting STAFF directs Peter to park.


  7. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I didn't expect I'd be a few minutes late.


  8. PETER: Thank you very much indeed!


  9. The staff then escorts Peter to a Conference room. An in person-and-Zoom MEETING has just started.


  10. PETER: My apologies!


  11. PETER (V.O.): I didn't join the previous one as I had to appear in court. I worried about another clash.


  12. Minutes confirmed.


  13. PETER (V.O.(Cont'd): Fortunately, I was in court last Friday and will appear again day after tomorrow.


  14. Act 2


  15. EXT. SILVERMINE BAY - AFTERNOON


  16. Leaving the hilltop car park, Peter walks down to the beach leisurely.


  17. PETER (V.O.): This small bay is paradise found.


  18. Recalling.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In my teens, I studied the Bible. My college was a Catholic one. I passed the subject alright.


  20. Peter sees a butterfly flying by.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In my late teens, I studied English Literature. The poem I studied was John Milton's Paradise Lost.


  22. Peter focuses on the butterfly.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The poem is about the Fall of Man, about Satan's temptations, about Adam and Eve, and their expulsion from the Garden of Eden.


  24. The butterfly rests on a railing.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The teacher spent a lot of time teaching Paradise Lost but I never liked it. I chose to study a novel which is less fictional to me.


  26. Peter then captures the butterfly's posture with his mobile.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before its transformation, it was a caterpillar.


  28. Later, Peter swims towards a floating platform.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): To me, a paradise isn't just a garden, it must have a beach and its sanctuary is only one swim away.

  30. Lying on a rocking-and-rolling platform, Peter has his chest facing the sun, using his hands to cover his face.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The sun is about 150 million km away from me. The sunshine I'm enjoying was emitted from it 8 minutes ago.


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's powerful though, as I've forgotten to put on my sunblock cream.


  34. After awhile, Peter jumps into the water from the platform ladder.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I don't know how high platform divers can cope with the weight of water.


  36. Pausing.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can cope with a little, losing myself a bit in the moment too.


  38. Peter swims to another floating platform.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This time, I'll have my back facing the sun.


  40. Peter watches his own head shadow.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My back is feeling the heat as if I'm having a sauna. I'll have to jump into the cold water soon.


  42. Recalling.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I was travelling in Japan and having hot baths, I like to do that.


  44. Peter jumps into the water from the platform ladder again.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I feel comfortable in my own skin, literally.


  46. Having swum around the Bay's swimming area, Peter returns to the beach to pick up his bag and other belongings.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, the time on the toll-on-the-pole should have already run out.


  48. After changing, Peter walks up to the hill-top car park hastily.

  49. Act 3


  50. EXT. ROADS TO URBAN AREAS - LATER


  51. Driving and thinking.


  52. PETER (V.O.): Just another visit to paradise, where every moment was pleasurable.


  53. Reflecting.

  54. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It may be that paradise isn't a location but a state of mind depending very little on outer experience.


  55. Reflecting.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before my retirement, I was like in a traffic jam and didn't know if the way would lead to paradise.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Since I've become an elderly, I've much of it, knowing and loving myself better.


  59. Pausing.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Although I was a little late, paradise is found!


  61. : FADE OUT.


  62. THE END


 
 
 

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